This book was an eye-opener for me. I am a Science Fiction guy and haven't read any Fantasy since the Lord of the Rings was big in the early '70s. To prepare for this beta read I read the first two books in the Schooled in Magic Series, they were fun. A school girl is kidnapped from a dreary life in Edinburgh to a world of magic. She is kidnapped because her mother's name is Destiny and the abductors are after a "Child of Destiny". In this new magical world of medieval technology, she is gifted with great powers, and one thing leads to another.
Update 10/18/15: Back from the editor giving it a reread for for inconsistencies, contradictions and reputations created by the modifications after the edit.
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